In Latin "ORCAE ITA" means "Pretty straightforward"
The darkest night,
The silent breeze,
Defeated by the lone candle.
The brightest candle,
The fresh flower.
Defeated by the cold wind.
The warmest wind,
The colorful picture,
Defeated by the endless time.
By candle you mean its flame, dont you?2nd stanza:The thickest flame,The brightest flower,Defeated by the cold wind.Somehow "Loudest" flower doesn't make sense. The other 2 Haikus are quite good :).Avenger Neomorph,Lone Observer,defeated by Grim Reaper:P
changed it a bit :) hope fully its beter , :) ohh you are bold enough to say that huh , shall see on sunday
da..i don get it!!
nice !
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By candle you mean its flame, dont you?
2nd stanza:
The thickest flame,
The brightest flower,
Defeated by the cold wind.
Somehow "Loudest" flower doesn't make sense. The other 2 Haikus are quite good :).
Avenger Neomorph,
Lone Observer,
defeated by Grim Reaper
:P
changed it a bit :) hope fully its beter , :)
ohh you are bold enough to say that huh , shall see on sunday
da..i don get it!!
nice !
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